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Monday, June 24, 2019

MY WRITING PURPOSE!!!!!!!!!


W.A.L.T decide on our purpose for writing.
 My writing purpose it to entertain the audience. 

 1.Getting lost in the Dark forest. 

 2. Falling down a hole.

 3. Finding her way out.

 4. EVERYONE DIES.

 Lost 
(In the dark scary forest) 

 Dark shadows danced in the depths of the gloomy forest as Lilly wandered through the depths of the great shadowy land. Suddenly the stony path Lilly was following disappeared like the sun disappearing behind a cloud. Lilly couldn't seem to find the way back. The wistful wind sent chills running down her back,the wrath of the cold winter wind.But she wasn’t in her cozy room no she was in the middle of a dark cold scary forest.

 The forest was filled with dancing shadows that hollowed deep throaty growls throughout the whole blackness of the forest.

 “Don’t panic it's going to be ok” Lilly mumbled to herself as she crept along.
 All of a sudden the dull beam of light from Lilly’s torch flickered out of existence now she was surrounded in darkness like being trapped in a box in a six meter hole in the ground.

 The air around her became mysteriously thin, She felt that she could no longer breath. Panic shot through her as she struggled for air. As she Stumbled over a large tree root… Lilly fell down down down………. 

 PART TWO COMING SOON….

Friday, June 21, 2019

My Quality Blog Post Poster!!!!!!!!!!!

 Today I learnt how to create a quality blog post Poster to describe what is needed to created a quality post on our blogs in our cyber smart lesson with whaea Donna.

How I made my poster was i went into drive and clicked on google drawings i then used information from a side that whaea Donna had set up for my class to use as an info guide to help us with our posters.

 Whaea Donna explained why we need a title that will pop and make our readers want to read more of our posts she also explained why its good to have a question at the end of our posts the reason is because it will give our readers something to think of and something to comment about.

1. A title that POPS.
2. An intro that hooks readers in.
3. Your Reflection on what you learnt/accomplished.
4. Your Sources/where you got the information from
5. your D.L.O.
6. And a Question that will make your readers want to comment.

Today I learnt that the sources of your information is important because if you add the link to the photos or videos that you've used it proves to the readers that your not just copying someone else's work and saying its your's.